hey, im new here, and i wanted to give my writing a try, to see if it can have an effect on other's, just as their work has an effect on me. here's one of my poems, i think its kinda weak, but i need your opinion. tell me the truth please, dont hold back, k? thanx.
you said you'd always be there, but youre constantly running away.
youre not the person i thought you were.
youve broken my heart, and cut me with it's shattered pieces.
and now i lay here, bleeding, drowning in my own crimson pool of despair and lost love.
who am i to tell you,
exactly how you make me feel?
tell me you love me;
you never knew what love was,
you and I both.