XXJesSUCKA'sXBr0k3nXSmi1eXX (x_markstheheart) wrote in beaded_poetry,

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im new to the neighborhood....

hey, im new here, and i wanted to give my writing a try, to see if it can have an effect on other's, just as their work has an effect on me. here's one of my poems, i think its kinda weak, but i need your opinion. tell me the truth please, dont hold back, k? thanx.


you said you'd always be there, but youre constantly running away.

youre not the person i thought you were.

youve broken my heart, and cut me with it's shattered pieces.

and now i lay here, bleeding, drowning in my own crimson pool of despair and lost love.

but who,

who am i to tell you,

just exactly,

exactly how you make me feel?


tell me you love me;

you never knew what love was,

you and I both.


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